Hall to McNair: September 30, 1983
Editorial note about this letter: The Argus Champion ran a front-page feature about McNair as the recipient of the Devins Award.
A note from McNair about this letter: Though it has been lost, I wrote Don an extensive critique of the third act of Ragged Mountain Elegies, following his request in the last paragraph.
Editorial note about this letter: The poem Hall comments on is “The Faith Healer,” which McNair sent to him in his previous letter. (Eventually Hall changed his mind and liked the poem.)
Dispensing with the occasional dialect Hall mentions in this letter, McNair decided to keep the rest of “The Faith Healer” as he had it despite Hall’s objections, sending to Wilmot his new draft on 9/25/1983. This became the published version, appearing in Poetry magazine and receiving, together with “The Portuguese Dictionary” and “Remembering Aprons,” Poetry’s Eunice Tietjens prize for 1984. See the final paragraph of Hall’s letter on 10/7/1983, where he questions his criticism of the poem.
Read The Faith Healer (published version)