Since I presented my research last class, I find that this class I was less scattered and I was more attentive to what my classmates had to say.

I will spare the compliments for the presentations I saw yesterday, they were all wonderful, I expected no less! However I find that watching my classmates present their research was truly helpful in organizing my own. I realized that the way I have organized my own research was a little obsucre, and that I need to simplify my terminologies and flesh out my ideas better in order for my paper to be more cohesive. I am a bit worried though, about the organizational aspect of my research, because it seems to me that most people in class have a specific idea in mind tha thtey are running with, even if their papers are not argumentative.

However I find that the nature of my paper is more comaprative? And as such, there are a lot of loose points that I will have to figure out how to turn into a cohesive body of work. After having had my meeting with professor Plesch though, I feel like I at least have the resources available to make this a good piece of work, I just need to spend more time organizing my research and working on my thesis.