{"id":1458,"date":"2012-02-23T13:22:13","date_gmt":"2012-02-23T17:22:13","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/web.colby.edu\/csc-mcnair\/?p=1458"},"modified":"2014-02-05T12:02:21","modified_gmt":"2014-02-05T16:02:21","slug":"section-iii-january-4-1980-october-6-1980","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/web.colby.edu\/csc-mcnair\/section-iii-january-4-1980-october-6-1980\/","title":{"rendered":"<span style='color: #800000'>III. A Deepening (1\/4\/1980 \u2013 10\/6\/1980)<\/span>"},"content":{"rendered":"<figure id=\"attachment_11436\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-11436\" style=\"width: 207px\" class=\"wp-caption alignright\"><a href=\"http:\/\/web.colby.edu\/csc-mcnair\/files\/2012\/01\/Hall-McNair-19800122-001-colby.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"wp-image-11436  \" style=\"border: 1px solid black; margin-left: 3px; margin-right: 3px;\" title=\"Poetry Magazine\" alt=\"Poetry Magazine\" src=\"http:\/\/web.colby.edu\/csc-mcnair\/files\/2012\/01\/Hall-McNair-19800122-001-colby.jpg\" width=\"207\" height=\"270\" \/><\/a><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-11436\" class=\"wp-caption-text\"><em>Poetry Magazine acceptance letter.<\/em><\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<p>There is good news as this section opens. Joseph Amaryllis sends word that \u00a0<em>Poetry<\/em> magazine\u00a0has accepted two of my poems. But there is bad news as well.\u00a0Don becomes so upset about my dual submission of poems to another editor that he decides Joey can no longer represent me.<\/p>\n<p>The other editor is a friend who founded a new Boston magazine about to go to press in its first issue without enough material. My work would help him with his start-up, and me with a Boston audience, I thought to myself, and besides, these were lesser poems that had been going nowhere. But Don (whose initial letter on the subject is missing) thought I had behaved badly, and he was right. The scrape I got myself into passed, but not without its lesson. I learned from it not only about proper submission, but all over again about Don\u2019s value to me as a submitter, advisor and friend.<\/p>\n<figure id=\"attachment_11460\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-11460\" style=\"width: 300px\" class=\"wp-caption alignleft\"><a href=\"http:\/\/web.colby.edu\/csc-mcnair\/files\/2012\/02\/8a2289b0063e0e990deb116a2287bd87.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"size-medium wp-image-11460   \" style=\"border: 1px solid black; margin-left: 3px; margin-right: 3px;\" title=\"Colgate Hall, Colby Sawyer College\" alt=\"Colgate Hall, Colby Sawyer College\" src=\"http:\/\/web.colby.edu\/csc-mcnair\/files\/2012\/02\/8a2289b0063e0e990deb116a2287bd87-300x197.jpg\" width=\"300\" height=\"197\" srcset=\"https:\/\/web.colby.edu\/csc-mcnair\/files\/2012\/02\/8a2289b0063e0e990deb116a2287bd87-300x197.jpg 300w, https:\/\/web.colby.edu\/csc-mcnair\/files\/2012\/02\/8a2289b0063e0e990deb116a2287bd87-1024x675.jpg 1024w, https:\/\/web.colby.edu\/csc-mcnair\/files\/2012\/02\/8a2289b0063e0e990deb116a2287bd87.jpg 1187w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/a><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-11460\" class=\"wp-caption-text\"><em>Colgate Hall, Colby-Sawyer College. Image courtesy Cleveland Colby Colgate Archives, Colby-Sawyer College.<\/em><\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>That is likely why I begin to sign my letters following this event with love, and to take his criticism more seriously. Asmy relationship with him deepens and I feel the vindication of my NEA fellowship, my correspondence becomes more frequent. During 1980, I write him nearly as many letters as in the four previous years combined, many of them accompanied by drafts of poems, and some others appraising Don\u2019s own poems.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<figure id=\"attachment_11437\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-11437\" style=\"width: 300px\" class=\"wp-caption alignright\"><a href=\"http:\/\/web.colby.edu\/csc-mcnair\/files\/2013\/12\/faces-americans-mss.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"size-medium wp-image-11437 \" style=\"border: 1px solid black; margin-left: 3px; margin-right: 3px;\" title=\"The Faces of Americans \" alt=\"The Faces of Americans\" src=\"http:\/\/web.colby.edu\/csc-mcnair\/files\/2013\/12\/faces-americans-mss-e1387483860136-300x89.jpg\" width=\"300\" height=\"89\" srcset=\"https:\/\/web.colby.edu\/csc-mcnair\/files\/2013\/12\/faces-americans-mss-e1387483860136-300x89.jpg 300w, https:\/\/web.colby.edu\/csc-mcnair\/files\/2013\/12\/faces-americans-mss-e1387483860136.jpg 464w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/a><figcaption id=\"caption-attachment-11437\" class=\"wp-caption-text\"><em>The Faces of Americans manuscript, by Wesley McNair<\/em><\/figcaption><\/figure>\n<p>Don\u2019s enthusiasm for my new work and Joey\u2019s success in publishing it blunt the pain of not placing my book with any of the presses I send it to, including the house for which Don is poetry consultant, Harper &amp; Row.Yet I still grouse about my situation, and Don steps in to encourage me, most notably in his astonishing letter of July 8, 1980, after which I find myself encouraging him about his own work.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"http:\/\/web.colby.edu\/csc-mcnair\/files\/2013\/12\/cald1.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"size-full wp-image-11434 alignleft\" style=\"border: 1px solid black; margin-left: 3px; margin-right: 3px;\" title=\"Caldecott\" alt=\"Caldecott\" src=\"http:\/\/web.colby.edu\/csc-mcnair\/files\/2013\/12\/cald1.jpg\" width=\"154\" height=\"154\" srcset=\"https:\/\/web.colby.edu\/csc-mcnair\/files\/2013\/12\/cald1-150x150.jpg 150w, https:\/\/web.colby.edu\/csc-mcnair\/files\/2013\/12\/cald1-36x36.jpg 36w, https:\/\/web.colby.edu\/csc-mcnair\/files\/2013\/12\/cald1-115x115.jpg 115w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 154px) 100vw, 154px\" \/><\/a>September arrives with news that Don has won the 1980 Caldecott Medal for his children&#8217;s book <em>The Ox-Cart Man.<\/em>The September letters also show us in conversation poems I hope to give to Joey for submission to magazines. In this fall, the two of us switch roles. Sponsored by my NEA fellowship, I am home at my farmhouse writing and revising poems; meanwhile Don is at Colby-Sawyer College, teaching a course in composition to spark interest in the second edition of <em>Writing Well<\/em>,\u00a0his college textbook.<\/p>\n<p><strong>[This section has 48 letters]<\/strong><\/p>\n<!--themify_builder_content-->\n<div id=\"themify_builder_content-1458\" data-postid=\"1458\" class=\"themify_builder_content themify_builder_content-1458 themify_builder tf_clear\">\n    <\/div>\n<!--\/themify_builder_content-->\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>There is good news as this section opens. Joseph Amaryllis sends word that \u00a0Poetry magazine\u00a0has accepted two of my poems. But there is bad news as well.\u00a0Don becomes so upset about my dual submission of poems to another editor that he decides Joey can no longer represent me. 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