{"id":13471,"date":"2017-09-17T16:00:29","date_gmt":"2017-09-17T20:00:29","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/web.colby.edu\/csc-mcnair\/?page_id=13471"},"modified":"2021-11-12T23:43:55","modified_gmt":"2021-11-13T03:43:55","slug":"map-of-mcnairs-journey-in-revision-guiding-questions","status":"publish","type":"page","link":"https:\/\/web.colby.edu\/csc-mcnair\/map-of-mcnairs-journey-in-revision-guiding-questions\/","title":{"rendered":"Map of McNair&#8217;s Journey in Revision: Guiding Questions"},"content":{"rendered":"<div style=\"font-weight: bold;\">\n<p><span style=\"color: #0000ff;\">Once<\/span><span style=\"color: #0000ff;\"> you have explored the poems of <em>The Unfastening<\/em><\/span>, return to the <a href=\"http:\/\/web.colby.edu\/csc-mcnair\/transition-of-book\/\">Map of Wesley McNair\u2019s Journey in Revision<\/a> page and take up some of the following questions, which link the map to McNair\u2019s intentions as he developed the themes of his book.<\/p>\n<ol>\n<li>In the second book manuscript, McNair has changed the title of his collection from <em>The Longing to See<\/em>&nbsp;to <em>The Unfastening<\/em>. Why is the latter title more appropriate for the collection?<\/li>\n<li>Like McNair\u2019s book title, each of the section titles is derived from a poem that has a central meaning. How do the title poems express the themes of their sections?<\/li>\n<li>Compare the poem list of McNair\u2019s first book manuscript to the final list of the publisher\u2019s proof, entry four. What poems have been added in the process of revision, and how do those poems expand the book\u2019s vision. Concentrate on sections two and four.<\/li>\n<li>In book manuscript three McNair has added a new section, \u201cThe Longing To See,\u201d which deals with art, and a variety of artists and makers. How does this section open the way from darkness to affirmation in <em>The Unfastening<\/em>, transforming the imagery of darkness, and of sight?<\/li>\n<li>Among the last poems written for <em>The Unfastening<\/em>, part of the \u201cburst of inspiration\u201d McNair mentions in his interview, are two at the very end of the collection: \u201cPraise Song\u201d and \u201cBenediction.\u201d These affirmative poems show the distance the book has come from its opening poems about death and loss. How do the <em>last three<\/em> poems of the book answer the earlier poems, altering our understanding of death and loss?<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<\/div>\n<!--themify_builder_content-->\n<div id=\"themify_builder_content-13471\" data-postid=\"13471\" class=\"themify_builder_content themify_builder_content-13471 themify_builder tf_clear\">\n    <\/div>\n<!--\/themify_builder_content-->\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Once you have explored the poems of The Unfastening, return to the Map of Wesley McNair\u2019s Journey in Revision page and take up some of the following questions, which link the map to McNair\u2019s intentions as he developed the themes of his book. In the second book manuscript, McNair has changed the title of his [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":7698,"featured_media":0,"parent":0,"menu_order":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","template":"","meta":{"ngg_post_thumbnail":0,"footnotes":""},"builder_content":"","_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/web.colby.edu\/csc-mcnair\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/13471"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/web.colby.edu\/csc-mcnair\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/web.colby.edu\/csc-mcnair\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/page"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/web.colby.edu\/csc-mcnair\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/7698"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/web.colby.edu\/csc-mcnair\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=13471"}],"version-history":[{"count":11,"href":"https:\/\/web.colby.edu\/csc-mcnair\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/13471\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":13824,"href":"https:\/\/web.colby.edu\/csc-mcnair\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/pages\/13471\/revisions\/13824"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/web.colby.edu\/csc-mcnair\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=13471"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}