{"id":12759,"date":"2017-07-06T11:32:55","date_gmt":"2017-07-06T15:32:55","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/web.colby.edu\/copycscmcnair\/?page_id=12759"},"modified":"2017-10-15T23:05:00","modified_gmt":"2017-10-16T03:05:00","slug":"s2p7-this-poem","status":"publish","type":"page","link":"https:\/\/web.colby.edu\/copycscmcnair\/s2p7-this-poem\/","title":{"rendered":"S2P8 &#8211; This Poem"},"content":{"rendered":"<h2>This Poem<\/h2>\n<p>Before the age of doing<br \/>\nand photographing and filming<br \/>\nand texting what you did,<br \/>\nback when people simply did,<br \/>\na girl got married at seventeen,<\/p>\n<p>recalled tonight under lamplight<br \/>\nin an Ozark farmhouse by my old,<br \/>\nwidowed Aunt Dot, the woman<br \/>\nwho once was her. There were no<br \/>\nphotos of the girl as she waited<\/p>\n<p>in the truck with her first<br \/>\ntwo babies for her husband<br \/>\nto come out of the bar<br \/>\nuntil it was dark, and then<br \/>\nin the dark. Nobody filmed him<\/p>\n<p>at the screen door of the kitchen,<br \/>\nwaking from the spell<br \/>\nof his anger with a lead pipe<br \/>\nin his hand saying, &#8220;I believe<br \/>\nI killed that cow,&#8221; or filmed her<\/p>\n<p>stepping between his fists<br \/>\nand her son on the night he broke<br \/>\nher nose. Literal, plainspoken<br \/>\nand sorrowful, Dot seems<br \/>\nto find her, the poor young girl,<\/p>\n<p>married for life, and him, my uncle,<br \/>\nthe good old boy everyone loved,<br \/>\nincluding me, in the shadows<br \/>\ncast by her lamp and chair,<br \/>\njust the three of them there,<\/p>\n<p>and me, and the small,<br \/>\nhand-held device of this poem.<\/p>\n<!--themify_builder_content-->\n<div id=\"themify_builder_content-12759\" data-postid=\"12759\" class=\"themify_builder_content themify_builder_content-12759 themify_builder tf_clear\">\n    \t\t\t<!-- module_row -->\n\t<div  data-lazy=\"1\" class=\"module_row themify_builder_row tb_un4j189 tb_first tf_w tf_clearfix\">\n\t    \t\t\t<div class=\"row_inner col_align_top tb_col_count_1 tf_box tf_rel\">\n\t\t            <div  data-lazy=\"1\" class=\"module_column tb-column col-full   tb_hfin819 first\">\n                                                        <div class=\"tb-column-inner tf_box tf_w\">\n                        <!-- module divider -->\n<div  class=\"module tf_mw module-divider tb_4zjz060 double   \" style=\"border-width: 1px;\" data-lazy=\"1\">\n    <\/div>\n<!-- \/module divider -->\n<!-- module text -->\n<div  class=\"module module-text tb_wpde260   \" data-lazy=\"1\">\n        <div  class=\"tb_text_wrap\">\n    <p><span style=\\\"color: #000000;\\\">Follow McNair\\&#8217;s thinking about this poem through his revisions of it. 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